Trapped in darkness, an emotional descent. Senses heightened, the distant sound of another being amplified. Bound, limbs cease to find movement. A laugh that echoes throughout, torments within. Ever closer, the pulse rises as the time to commence befalls.
A touch, a cold graze of a long cane. Anticipation quells as footsteps circle around. A strike, an intense burning sting that radiates throughout. Others follow, the impact unrelenting. Thoughts begun to melt and spin. Time becomes eternal, sensations fill the body.
The pain dulls, they draw close. Breathe interchanging. A hand prickles the skin of a cheek. The blindfold lifted, exposing eyes of a fearful body.
Images blur as light pierces through. Vision slowly returns. Standing before, a masked figure, distinguished only by purple eyes.
Pulling at the restraints, movement is futile. A blade in the left hand reflects off the harsh light. The hand ascends bringing a spontaneous flinch. Adrenalineย shoots through like a bullet. Another laugh, ripping through a tortured soul.
Reaching around, a fistful of hair is pulled, a vulnerable neck exposed. The blade teases over the skin sending with it a ripple of fear. Inner voices want to scream but find no words.
Hair released, a momentary grace. only moments of composure were allowed as the blade continued. An intense burn as the knife drags along skin, with it a draw of blood. A release seeps down the arm, a cold rush trickles.
Flowing to the fingertips, drips hit the floor. Pooling at the feet. Left shackled, the figure leaves.
The fogs of headspace de-mist, limbs find feeling. The constriction that was once there ebbs away. An arm once covered in blood, a scar it’s only reminder.
Oooh super sexy. I enjoyed this very much ๐
Thank you, was a little worried how dark this became when I wrote it
This sent a shiver down my spine! Powerful writing!
Rebel xox
Thanks, having nice feedback justifies asking my wife to put make up on me for this post.
Really like the way you have written this – great job
Thank you ๐
Oh goodness, very haunting and still very sexy. ๐
Thanks, I wanted it to be dark and try to write something where both characters don’t have defined genders.
I love knives and I love blood play, this totally ticks some boxes for me
Mollyx
Thanks Molly ๐
Wow, that was intense! The descriptions were vivid and striking. Loved it! Thanks for sharing! ๐
Thank you ๐
This is really hot and I love the poetic style that you have used which makes it flow in a snapshot way and combines the actions with emotions.
It more came about because I didn’t want to use she or he. I enjoyed writing it a bit differently too. Thanks missy
Oh yes! blade play, blood, all so hot and one of my favorites. That you very much for sharing this torrid piece
Torrid, yes that’s exactly how I wanted it to be, thank you